Oh! Right sure, um, here...
[ He sketched out a sort of rough map on the journals for him, labeling as best he could, trying to think of it all from an arial view, which was harder than expected. ]
Does that make sense?
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Oh! Right sure, um, here...
[ He sketched out a sort of rough map on the journals for him, labeling as best he could, trying to think of it all from an arial view, which was harder than expected. ]
Does that make sense?